All Comments on 'The Second Floor Ch. 01'

wonderful story you've begun here.

I really like the intensity of feeling you've got the incubus experiencing. Kind of nice to have the demon on a back foot (or hoof) for once.

I admit to being very curious about what the girl has going on to be able to keep him off like this.

I hope you will eventually finish this series. Even if you don't, I hope you keep writing, here or somewhere else. Good work. Thanks.

Please continue!!! I love this so much I can't wait to read the rest of this!!

Really well written, I can feel the energy and emotions shine through! I'm excited for more, don't make me wait too long!

I can't thank you enough for your praise. I've never put my work out for people to read before now. I assure you there will be MUCH more for you all to read. :3

~The Incubus