All Comments on 'The Second Marriage Ch. 01'

Lots of doors you've left open. I look forward to seeing which ones you enter and explore. Keep it going. // R1

A lot of people feels like this please continue the journey.

Hi !!!! Think you have built a good start. There are many ideas that both may have in store for their future meetings.

I felt as if I knew them, and wanted to meet her myself. Him? Well he's a nice guy, but no thanks.

but the misuse of language (to instead of too, obstinacies instead of obscenities, pushing up her shirt instead of her skirt, etc.) was distracting. You need a proofreader who can proofread - not just use a spell checker...

Can't wait to read more about this couple

Nice story.Needs a follow up