All Comments on 'The Second Time Ch. 01'

by MandL

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GoneAgainGoneAgainover 18 years ago
Nicely Done

Nicely done first story!

peggytwittypeggytwittyover 18 years ago
Very good story

This is exhibitionism to the enth degree. You can’t go much further in exhibitionism till its group sex.

To set the scene you might want to fill people in on the club setup, the club rules, and maybe a little more of the atmosphere. I’m not a writer so take my suggestions with a grain of salt.

Good writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Great writing

More please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
More please

Great stuff!

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