All Comments on 'The Secret Journal'

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Kiriodes94Kiriodes94almost 10 years ago
um...

Wow is right... i really liked this story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
hot

Whoa. Amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wow

Everything that I've wanted in a story. Love it and plan on reading it again.

-ZT

CwW89CwW89over 9 years ago
Great

I would love to see a part 2,3 and 4 of this. It is a great story. Please add to it

JS_PhotoJS_Photoalmost 6 years ago
Good but much too short

Great premise and potential but it needs to be longer - more character development and description of the action.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Moar!!

Scratches my fetish itch, but it needs more. The story itself is perfect, but if it had more time for characterization and the like, it would be a work of art.

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