by catfacts
Scratches my fetish itch, but it needs more. The story itself is perfect, but if it had more time for characterization and the like, it would be a work of art.
Great premise and potential but it needs to be longer - more character development and description of the action.
I would love to see a part 2,3 and 4 of this. It is a great story. Please add to it
Everything that I've wanted in a story. Love it and plan on reading it again.
-ZT