All Comments on 'The Seduction of Louise Ch. 05'

Very good series. The anticipation of her slow fall from fidelity is excruciatingly delicious. Please write in more detail as she makes excuses to go further each step of the way. And please lend a couple paragraphs to her ultimate indiscretion. I also love the tension you build by having them in a setting where they may get caught. And then how she loves the feeling of his cum in her cloths afterwards.

Excellent story. Keep up the good work.

i can't thank you enough for writing this story. it keeps getting better. please write more. very hot!

What can I say? I'm hooked.

I love this relationship. Louise is perfectly drawn. A wonderful character.

eric shawn

It was so hot that Louise came too!

So true about the thrill of watching somebody else masturbate for the first time!

I know this is an older story and I am very tardy in my reading of it....but I love the way you build the characters and plot in your stories. So entertaining!