All Comments on 'The Seduction of Louise Ch. 13'

Nice to see them settling in.

esl

The humanity and detail you captured so keenly made this series a remarkable and exciting read. You developed your characters so that their intimate growth was not only engrossing but also very real. You have a gift for writing the most sexually explicit scenes with detail that is always imaginative and never boring. One could be a watcher more engaged only if he (or she) were physically present in the room with this marvelous couple. I'm a big fan of May December stories; Seduction of Louise is in a class by itself. Truly a pleasure to read (and pleasure myself in the bargain). Best regards, Kal

Even though this series is 15 years old, I'm amazed that it didn't generate more viewers or comments! I've read thousands of stories on this site over the years and I can honestly say that this series is one of the best that I've ever read. If I had one criticism, it would be the short, one page chapters. I've never been a fan of one page stories as they usually end before you can cum. In my opinion, it would have been better to shorten the series to 7 or 8 chapters and just have each chapter be 2-4 pages each. Maybe something to think about with the new Mable's Breasts series? Still five stars for this chapter!