All Comments on 'The Seduction of Mrs Walsh Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymous10 days ago

Great story line. Room for many more chapters. I hope you keep going. I want to find out if Mary already told Anne about you two and gave her permission to go for it. Maybe Mary’s daughter comes to surprise her mother only to find out she’s in Florida.

Can’t wait for the next Ch.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Why did you repeat chapter 3 with #4? Seems like you lost interest and gave up on the story. Story leaves a few questions unanswered!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Sequel

C,mon, you can't leave us hanging about Mary?

roveroneroveronealmost 6 years ago
fun, and yes hot ...BUT...waxed...really-?!

all the older ladies I've had as girlfriends all had their bush...and i LOVE to go down...!

hard to imagine why any grammIe-age woman I know now would want to have her snizz look like a 10-year olds...

suspect this is the (male) author's preference

Pulsifer42Pulsifer42about 6 years ago
Whew........

................gotta take a cold shower. WOW ! Superb story, but as amazing as it was, you are so talented you have to keep going and finish it. Thanks for a great read.

oldtwitoldtwitalmost 7 years ago
Great

Great read, plenty of descriptions of everything plenty of good well described sex and likeable people through out this story, looking for the follow up I hope you do continue with this .

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Don't stop now. bet mary knows all about it. and will come home to join in. don't knw how Jennifer will fit in.C6F8

liz33ndliz33ndover 7 years ago
mighty fine writing

I love it and need more, it is well written and very sexy.

oldwayneoldwayneover 7 years ago
Good while it lasted!

Five Stars the whole way!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Brilliant

What a fantastic story, geez couldn't this just keep on going.

Your a fantastic writer thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
This is a great story line

Very good story

Keep this thread going!

TSreaderTSreaderover 7 years ago
A very yummy chapter!

So very good! Another great addition to your story! Thank you!

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