All Comments on 'The Sexual Fantasy Group'

by jaspmon

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
I loved this story

Omg!!! I want 2 b a part of this

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Keep trying

I have to hand it to you. At least you put a story together and submitted it. I have yet to do so. You should definitely let someone edit your work as it reads like directions to assemble furniture.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Pleasuring your Wife

I really admire any man who, like you and I, put our wives pleasure above our own. I believe thats why there are so many affairs in marriages; the husbands are too selfish and don't take time to learn what their wives like in the bedroom. Time takes a toll on a marriage, but the honeymoon DOESN'T have to end. I hope other husbands take your fantasy as a "stepping stone" toward building a long lasting and sexually rewarding marriage. Keep up the good work!

luuv2watchuluuv2watchuabout 4 years ago

No dialogue. Nobody screams out in filthy mouthed ecstasy how amazing it all is. Argh. Boring if no one talks and just description.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Dear, oh Dear,

What could have been an excellent story, as you had had an excellent idea, was spoiled by a poor, slow unimaginative writer.

I agree that the story read like assembly instructions.

I couldn't even finish it, I was so bored, and my erection faded away.

Your story?????

One word:- YAWN.

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