by Nicola_Italia1
I loved this chapter as well, having Yasmeen recieve what she was getting to her was wonderful.
I only found one discrepency in the story and that was how, Kat was able to untie hereself so quickly.
I also would have liked if you played more on KAt's fear and Mohammed's rage as well.
That's my two cents, but all in all a very delicious chapter.
I've been itching for this one... well worth the wait!!
I'm going to print the chapters and make this one a book... best series on the site!! ;-)
Another great chapter, but you know I am greedy, so make the next one soon and longer.
to see this one up there in the comments forum.
Take pride of place in first position where it deserves to be!!
I love that she got what was coming to her for trying to get rid of Kat! But now what happens to Kat??
As always great job! And I'll be looking for the next chapter!
This series just keeps getting better--the twists in the plot--the great sex--I can't wait for more--Nicola you always leave me hard and wanting more! Thankyou!
I am addicted to this story!!!!! Plz write soon, you are very talented!