All Comments on 'The Shower'

Your first story brings exciting images that are very clear, realistic, and erotic. The only thing that was missing was the sweet smell of Ivory Soap. I trust that you will write again.

If her butt slips out of his hands while she is up there, and she falls .... Will his penis have a really bad oweee?? Well, once I got past that thought ... I have to say that thias is one hell of a good story.

Don't ever start a story with "you"! What are you--"Hustler"magazine? This is the worst perscpective to write in. Because it doesn't exist outside of porn crap.

This is one of the most erotic and sensual short stories I've read. Showers have always held a potential for sensuality for me, this made it more real.

mmmmmmmmm I'd love to have you in MY shower ;)