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All Comments on 'The Sinister Maid Affliction'

by Dommoser

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PrincessErinPrincessErinover 15 years ago
Good

Another good story although I agree that your sentences seem artificial and there isn't a lot of good dialogue. I also don't like first person stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Please!

Get an editor, your sentence structure is abysmal.

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