by MissLovely
I - personally - am not into the "her body betrayed her"-thing. For me, there is nothing arousing about being abused. Apart from that,... I am intrigued.
I prefer stories focusing on a strong plot, interesting characters and their emotions, with a few slow, detailed sex scenes serving that plot. You have created a scenario that has the potential to become just that.
Let's see where you are going with this...
Good beginning. Hope Rita's owner's attitude toward her becomes kinder. Hope to read more of this story soon. Thanks for your story.