All Comments on 'The Slave'

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NM_CandlewoodNM_Candlewoodover 7 years ago

Hot throughout and it ends on such a sweet note! Yes, this is good stuff :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great story

Please continue! Would love to see more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Aww

Awwwwwww loved this story so much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good story.

This was a good and we'll thought out love story. Would love to see more of this. Could focus on how brutal Lars can be to protect her and that will reinforce how he would go to the ends of the earth for her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Love it.

SeducedbyfishSeducedbyfishabout 2 years ago

This is horrible. -.-

AspieGirl88AspieGirl88about 2 years ago

Donโ€™t listen to any negative comments, hon. That story was beautifully written & the romance is sweeter than most movies Iโ€™ve seen, so very well done. If only we could all find a gentle stranger to fall in love & run away with for a happy ending like this one! ๐Ÿ˜Šโค๏ธ๐Ÿ‘Œ

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