by TranslucentGirl
Hot throughout and it ends on such a sweet note! Yes, this is good stuff :D
This was a good and we'll thought out love story. Would love to see more of this. Could focus on how brutal Lars can be to protect her and that will reinforce how he would go to the ends of the earth for her.
Donโt listen to any negative comments, hon. That story was beautifully written & the romance is sweeter than most movies Iโve seen, so very well done. If only we could all find a gentle stranger to fall in love & run away with for a happy ending like this one! ๐โค๏ธ๐