All Comments on 'The Sleep Over'

I loved it please keep writing

fucking 1/2 the neighborhood!! I gave this a 5!!

a 5 for your effort and content!

gave you a 5

Lighten up!

It's only a story---it's erotica...it's good honest pornography.... and as such I give it a 5.

I enjoyed this story..

I had a friend years ago that was like Nicole...

Although, I don't believe she ever received the "Horse Pounding" that your Nicole did in this fun little read....

Cheers!

Great stroke story. And to all you anons, if you don't have the balls to use your name, keep your trap shut.

Not sure why, but the last four stories have got me going. Husband is in for a very long night. Thank you.

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While you write pretty well, with a gossipy, conspiratorial tone, you only offer your versions of stories that have been floating around Lit for years and years.

I would truly appreciate something unique and more developed from you. That means more complex and longer.

As I said, you write pretty well, just seem to stick with 1-2 page short stories.

Why not tackle something in the three to six chapter realm with settings familiar to you and with so,ething other than the friend fucks his wife at the barbecue routine?

You can do it!

You will likely find it tortuous, maddening, fearful and exciting.....and hopefully very rewarding.....but that will depend upon content and storyline, won't it?

I get a kick out of the reader looking for something new. Lots of luck on that; completely new plots are about as rare as hen's teeth. The best we can hope for is the same old line presented in a fresh way, hopefully with a few new twist, probably borrowed from another story.

So anyway, you're doing good. Maybe a little too much padding at first, or maybe you could have made it shorter and clearer. Then again, maybe I'm the only one who started to get bored before you finally kicked into action. After you got going, you made up for all shortcomings. KEEP WRITING!

This was a nice little story-Just the kind I love.-gave it a 5.

Once again you have made me so hard. I can't stop wanking to your stories!!! Keep writing and don't listen to the criticism. This isn't literature, it's porn and it's amazing....5 stars.....cheers

Don't worry. Those who criticize couldn't write a note to their kids. It's people like that who have run off so many good writers. There are too many people who thoroughly enjoy your writing for you to leave. Go Brittni4u.

Every woman should get fucked so well by a well hung man!!

Totally loved the voyeur aspect to this.

Remember, corvettes don't have back seats ;)

Marc n Chance

For the read.

But I was hoping for Britt, Lexi and Bob 🤤

Love it the hottest part was At the beginning Nicole pleasuring Bob s ass

He sounds like a very nice fuck! WHat luck! Sucks she’s cheating on her husband though. I feel bad for Gary. Nice work author, very nicely done.

Hello Brittni4u

Haha! That is one hell of a family get-together!

I had a feeling as I read on that Nichole would somehow not be able to resist Bob's huge cock!

And you and your sister got treated to one hell of a show!!

- Slutty Matthew

IRL,one quick flick of my wrist with my trusty KBAR,and macho man Bob would be crying like the bitch that he really is,and he would always be 1/2 a man.