All Comments on 'The Stag Film'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
She nor Todd could have been any dumber.

Fuck a girl, get her to pose for tasteful photos, gradually incite her to take more revealing sexual ones. Then finally a full sex film. Oh yeah, what well refined technique was this, oh yes, one as old as time. No the new boyfriend was not dumb enough to openly take photos of her, he had well placed cameras timed to take plenty of photos for future use. I got mad so I had sex with the other guy, is about as good of a rationalization for becoming a slut as a girl can have. He isnt worthy of me so I will become even lower than him, sound like sane thinking to you?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Ignore...

Ignore the earlier comment, just enjoy what is a sexy `stag-film-like` story!

ErotonautErotonautabout 16 years ago
Wrongheaded comments

The first poster is completely off-beam here. Janie simply realises her boyfriend is treating her like a slut and decides to get her revenge, by copping off with his friend and humiliating the dickhead.<br>

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It might have been even hotter had the money shot been set up with Matt fucking her pussy as a precursor to cumming over her ass, but that would probably have stretched credulity too far: better to have Todd suggest a scenario he could just about handle, then see everything go to Hell right before his eyes.<br>

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The fact that she gets together with Matt afterwards was a nice touch. Meanwhile, Todd spends his nights watching film of his ex-girlfriend sucking off his ex-pal and wondering how he came to be such a loser.

ErotonautErotonautover 13 years ago
"He knows a good thing when he sees it"

Especially when he sees it fucking his best friend and loving every minute of it.<br>

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I have one minor criticism. The story's set in 1965, yet the penultimate paragraph makes the events sound like they happened less than a year ago, let alone 45. Also, stag films (on celluloid) were still popular well into the late 1970s. The VCR revolution didn't kick in till around 1979-80.

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I began writing erotic stories in my early teens. I feel this is my calling. I try to write stories that are at least somewhat believable. I love women and don't like to see them victimized or brutalized. Yes, there are some typos and other mistakes in my stories. I'm not...