All Comments on 'The Start of Something Beautiful'

Good start hope that the story continues

Although I also feel like another sex scene. It's found a good ending point Hellkite. Some of the stories on here try to squeeze in many more because you lose the background story. The erotic parts as a result lose more than half their value no matter which way you look at it.

Brilliant! One of the absolute best I've read in any of the genres!

Ok, I've been reading all your stuff. It's all phenomenal. Seriously, 10/10 I'm bookmarking all of it. And, a little trivia for you since you left us some of your own, this particular reader had his cock in his hand the whole time reading.