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All Comments on 'The Start of Things to Come Ch. 01'

by lbob1

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ReiDeBastosReiDeBastosalmost 9 years ago
"cliterous"?

The word is "clitoris".

Tis is only one example of the piece's desperate need of an editor.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Did you pencil run out of lead?

Unless the next installment comes soon, and is really substantive and memorable, this story is already finished. Rating withheld till we see what you got. So far its trending a puzzling and pointless 2.

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