All Comments on 'The Strip and Fuck Club Ch. 01'

There is a lot going on in this story. And even though the main points were brought out I think you ended it much too abruptly. Yes, there was already the scene with the stripper in the computer, but I think you should have continued with the father-daughter liaison just to stretch things out a bit. Or you might have given us a bit more about what was going on with the mother. I'm just saying that it needed to be fleshed out with more details and action (pardon the pun). But you're the writer--what do I know?

Roger.

More to cum in the next chapters.

A very promising start

If you’re going to have sex stories that involve incest please just say so in the tags! I can’t be the only reader that finds it sickening , this was really off putting.

Tess

Well I for one found it very hot and it looks like a great family business, wish we were part of it. I can see bidding on the striper on stage, but sex with her on stage, now that's hot.