All Comments on 'The Strip Club Ch. 01'

by UncleWayne

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prop69prop69almost 6 years ago
Awesome story

Love Holly and Rochelle and their profession.

Short story.

What a story with the dancing and sex.

Most clubs are concerned about sex between management and the girls.

Still made me hard.

ju8streadingju8streadingalmost 6 years ago

i don't believe any father who loved his daughter could pimp her out.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Loved this story!

Very erotic story! Loved the premise and hope you continue with it. Perhaps some dirty language calling the girls filthy names as they get off on being 2 very young whores would make it even more exciting. Also would luv to have the girls suck cum off of each other in front of the men to make them hornier.

chapelsknightchapelsknightalmost 6 years ago
Dreams

Only in my wildest dreams could I ever hope to find such ladies!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Oops, now I making typos.

I meant to put '"friends' daughter" (two friends, both her parents).'

BlueEyd2BlueEyd2almost 6 years ago
great story but better editing please

steve is introduced as Holly's uncle, and they refer to her as his granddaughter. distracting

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Excellent story

This is a great starter job for young girls just starting out. It’s great to see dad helping out.

prop69prop69over 4 years ago
What a lucky Uncle.

Wish she was my "niece".

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