All Comments on 'The Surprised Attraction Ch. 05'

I just read the last 4 chapters right before you uploaded this one. This story is coming together perfectly. Please continue- 5 STARS

Hey, great job on your writing. I know you said you were new, and it showed in the first half of the first chapter. Now, it's quite entertaining. Keep it up. :)

Keep the chapters coming. You are doing a good job writing. Thanks

I am enjoying your well written story a lot. I would suggest you get an editor or at least someone to read your chapters before submitting them. Your spell check appears to be doing strange things. "Infant" for "in front" is one example. This is just a suggestion to make an already good story better

I beg of you to not ruin a great story.

Please dont involve the parents. Especially not the dad. Mom might still be okay but please please please no dad.