by sraynes
Maybe look up the definition of the word proboscis before you use it in a story again. That almost completely killed the mood for me. Good story in general, but don't use words you don't know.
I apologize for my terminology regarding "proboscis". I was less than sober when I wrote this hahahahaha.
This was my first attempt at an erotic story so I really hope I did well!
loved to read this i hope to be able to read more soon. thank you for your time to write this story. best wishes .xoxo