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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
awesome start

loved to read this i hope to be able to read more soon. thank you for your time to write this story. best wishes .xoxo

sraynessraynesabout 7 years agoAuthor
I'd also like to add..

This was my first attempt at an erotic story so I really hope I did well!

sraynessraynesabout 7 years agoAuthor
Re: Good, but...

I apologize for my terminology regarding "proboscis". I was less than sober when I wrote this hahahahaha.

DianeRedfernDianeRedfernabout 7 years ago
Good appetizer

Nice opening. Cant wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Good, but...

Maybe look up the definition of the word proboscis before you use it in a story again. That almost completely killed the mood for me. Good story in general, but don't use words you don't know.

JoannePareJoannePareabout 7 years ago
Wonderful

Dear Steph,

Wonderful story I am eager to read more.

Love

Joanne

XO

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