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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Needs some editing

There are some line breaks in strange places and some missing punctuation. Also one of the main characters changes name halfway through a paragraph.

tarredtarredabout 10 years agoAuthor
Needs editing

Sorry for the edit issues - I will solve them

Thanks for the feedback

TankpoetTankpoetabout 10 years ago

Looking forward to 'another story'

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This was exceptionally hot. This story was both sexy, messy, and somewhat wholesome. I had to stop halfway through as well. Good work on this.

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I live in the UK, I am a professional author, writing novels under (another) pen-name, this is my relaxation and where I can share stories which I enjoy. I have a very eclectic taste which includes bondage, wet and messy play and equestrians so you may see these appear in so...