All Comments on 'The Takeover Ch. 02'

by Rebeccahw2

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sassysasha89sassysasha89over 11 years ago

So glad to see another chapter of this. Hope you'll write more of this

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
awesome

this is an awesome story.. i hope you will write the next chapter in first person rather than in reported speech all the time. keep them coming :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
wow!

Such a hot and sexy story! i loved how you ended up in her bed in her lingerie fucking her man. So damn erotic. Maybe you can take him while lying on her wedding dress!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

So sensual sucking his cock on the ride home while Jan was passed out on the back seat. Then again screwing on their marital bed and finally taking him in your sexy ass. Waiting for chapter 3.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Disgusting

You are a disgusting piece of trash. She is your friend and you have the nerve to ruin her life for your own selfish needs. I hope he dumps you just like your ex husband.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
poor story telling

Poor writing and poesy frien and human being.

The story was not erotic or interesting.

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