by Rebeccahw2
Poor writing and poesy frien and human being.
The story was not erotic or interesting.
You are a disgusting piece of trash. She is your friend and you have the nerve to ruin her life for your own selfish needs. I hope he dumps you just like your ex husband.
So sensual sucking his cock on the ride home while Jan was passed out on the back seat. Then again screwing on their marital bed and finally taking him in your sexy ass. Waiting for chapter 3.
Such a hot and sexy story! i loved how you ended up in her bed in her lingerie fucking her man. So damn erotic. Maybe you can take him while lying on her wedding dress!
this is an awesome story.. i hope you will write the next chapter in first person rather than in reported speech all the time. keep them coming :)