All Comments on 'The Takeover Ch. 03'

you can only hope the bitch and her lover get caught by a mexican drug cartel

What the duck did Jan do that deserved such pain? Really, this was completely UNerotic. Thanks for making me lose my wood.

You write great sex scenes, then completely drain the eroticism out of them by making one women a disgustingly nasty borderline bipolar bitch, while the wife seems to be mentally retarded. Nothing sexy about a bitch picking a moron. I'm still trying to figure out where the hell the non-con went, because the sex is apparently all consensual without a hint of reluctance.

I thought it was very well written. Keep up the good work

What did Jan do to deserve this? She didn't satisfy her husband in bed, and she was completely condescending to Rebecca.

This story needs more to it. Keep Jan in the picture and continue the seduction.

So hot, I want to go seduce my friend's husband right now.

When is the next chapter coming?

That poor wife...

I hope for your sake this series is only fiction. If you actually did all thaw things to this woman who has been a friend to you, then you are a sick backstabbing whore.

Wish some woman would do this for me...been married for fifteen looooooooooooong years.

Keep going!

Glad you stopped writing.

These are the type of women men want to round up and push out the cockpit door just off the coast of an uncharted island where they can do their thang with not one man on the island and see how long they last!