All Comments on 'The Taking of Joanne'

by chinadoll69

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Man RayMan Rayalmost 19 years ago
Good..

Good story but you need to edit and check your spelling more, I know its picky but it detracts a little from what is a hot little piece.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Consent is good In story.

You've done a good job at keeping fantasy as fantasy. This is what we want in more reluctance stories. Consent is always necessary for a category like this.

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