All Comments on 'The Tales of Mistress Raven Ch. 01'

ember that was great when will the next chapter be available? would you consider doing a series with a female police officer making a male suspect do as she wishes just a thought

That was a wonderful beginning to your story. I love it when an other writes the story in the third person rather than in the first person. You painted the story very well and it was very stimulating. I look forward to reading more of your stories and the continuation of this one. Hugs, Jenna