- BDSM
- The Ten Game Pt. 04
- Page 3
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Click hereSam's dress felt like it was in tatters. Sam started to approach his own orgasm as the hand quickened as well. He was close to cumming. He could feel it. Audrey screamed. Sam groaned. The unknown person moaned. And then it all stopped.
Audrey's pussy was practically dripping with cum and sweat as she removed herself from Sam's face. The hand had stopped just short of Sam ejaculating resulting in pangs of frustrated pain as his cock tensed and relaxed in confusion. Still dazed, Sam blinked a few times and attempted to raise his head to see who the mystery person was. He caught a glimpse of her just before Audrey pushed him back down by the throat. His head hit the table, hard. But Sam had seen who it was and boy, was he surprised. Audrey removed the strapon and Sam looked back at her.
Marina was smiling back at him, lovingly and lustfully. He wanted to talk to her but it wasn't long before Audrey sat back on Sam's face, her soaking wet cunt on his lips. But Audrey was facing Marina now. As Sam got back to work, bringing Audrey to orgasm again, he felt the lips line up against his cock, or thought he did. A moment later he realised he was at least 4 inches deep in Marina.
Marina bounced up and down a few times before Audrey spread Marina's lips and pushed her down another 2 inches. Marina moaned loudly. After all of the oral pleasure she had given out she needed something in return. She had tried playing with herself under the table, but it didn't come close to quenching her insatiable appetite. She needed more. She needed cock. Sam's cock to be precise.
She slid down the familiar, perfect member and squeezed her breasts. She had already started to cum. Marina closed her eyes and felt Audrey's hand start to caress her body. Marina grabbed it and placed it at her clit. She started grinding. Audrey moved forward and left her asshole waiting for Sam's tongue. He swirled his tongue around the sphincter as she pleasured his girlfriend.
Her body rocked back and forth as Sam stimulated her asshole. Marina placed a hand on Sam's torso and another on his legs. There was no more time to mess around. She started to really fuck. She crashed her body backwards and forwards, not up and down like an amateur. Each time she did, she felt Sam's enormous cock slam into her spot. Again and again she felt it, bringing her closer and closer to orgasm.
Audrey stood up and walked over to Marina. She ran her fingers through her hair and pulled Marina's face to her cunt. Marina knew what to do from her training and started licking in a rapid 'O' shape. Audrey pulled back and slapped Marina on the face. Marina looked back at her, daring and unflinching. Audrey tried to smile, but it faltered. She stepped away. Marina looked down at Sam, still wearing his dress and stockings.
She bent over and hovered her face above his. She smiled when she saw his makeup. They stared at each other before Marina kissed him passionately. She ripped his dress open from the hem and felt his chest. She had missed him so much. Her hand holding his legs down finally let go and Sam was able to contribute. He started to thrust in time with Marina.
Her hands ruffled his hair. He kissed her neck. She bit his lip. Her hands ran down his strong wiry arms and lats. She started to moan. Sam thrust harder. He was so close. She scratched his chest. Sam grunted. He was cumming.
Marina started to scream, her body was on fire. She wrapped her soft wet lips over his as they came in unison. Marina's body collapsed on Sam's as he shot load after load inside of her. The guests watched in awe as steam rose from the 2 lovers in the chilly air. Sam looked at Marina.
"I love you," he smiled.
"I love you too, Sam."
They lay there panting for what seemed like forever.
- COMMENTS
liz33nd12 months agoi really liked this sieries, but felt dissapointed, i knew Sammantha would have a long black cock to please, sadly his girl friend sucked him off. i still gave it 4 stars, i enjoyed it.
nakedguyatxover 1 year agoThis was a great series. It's a shame you never finished it. What were the ten tasks, and especially, what was the tenth?
Anonymousover 2 years ago*Disappointment*
The first chapter was incredibly exciting. But then I read just to finish reading.
I agree with the third comment under the third chapter.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoI love this story I have a couple of minor reservations, like them all getting drunk in Ch 1. BDSM and being drunk is a bad combination then again it wasn’t a technical type scene (restraints etc) The Doms and Dommes don’t come across as being consistent on sub welfare and aftercare.
Wish I could’ve found a similar club! Your story is very well written and highly plausible, am really hoping you are able to find time to write some more. Your work is appreciated. Hugs from a UK fan.
LostnFoundBinabout 6 years agoYou’ve got a good story, solid engaging characters we can empathize with and a good setting to let them explore. You even created some interesting and well written erotic scenes and story arcs, but why did you have to rely on hypno for two chapters to gain control over the male protagonist?
Was it because “they” knew he couldn’t be bent any other way? No. Because he buckled under just a stare and a command in first chapter.
It just seems very contrived plot convention to resolve something that wasn’t a problem and now you’re stuck in a damn corner. It’s the same thing as the magic cock syndrome. In those stories once you’ve been touched by it, you can never go back, it becomes your fear, your desire, your everything and there is no hiding from it...unless the poor victim undergoes deprogramming from the MC...but are they truly ever free...muahahaha...Yada, yada, yada.
But when hypno becomes the focal point of a story its much worse than MC syndrome because both the protagonist and the dom lose control. If he does what the dom wants of his own free will, it is not submission to the dom, he is submitting to the fear of what the hypno would do to him. If he refuses and the hypno kicks in, the dom is not making him do the actions the hypno is. Under hypno as you have written it he blanks out, no recollection of the event. He just wakes up and takes stock of what’s around him to try to understand what occurred. He never surrenders power to the dom so it really doesn’t matter. So there is no real submission.
And since he has no control or memory of his actions when he’s under, he is therefore also well aware that the hypno control is so deep that there is no limit on the potential use of him...so is there a code word to kill, mame, or harm himself or others? Okay maybe I took that too far for a story like this, but that’s where hypno can get you off the rails.
But even without the extreme stuff, you’re still now stuck with...are you going to reverse it? If so how? Use the standard unprogramming plotline? Like MC syndrome...will it work? Will they still leave a few trigger words? Etc... or maybe we go with he was never really hypnotized to do anything and he only did what he wanted to... or how about it was a drug that will wear off shortly...or...
What a crappy place for a great writer like you to be stuck. I look forward to your resolution to these issues and the next chapter. I’m just slightly disappointed that you have to fix it.
