All Comments on 'The Text Ch. 03'

This chapter didn't really move the story forward. It could have been said in 2 paragraphs. When doing short chapters especially, you gotta move it forward quicker. The first trip to the bathroom wasn't necessary, even if the second did something for the plot. or was important enough to leave in.

I liked it alot! Keep going!! I cant wait to read more!

Enjoyed the story. When will the next be posted?

oh so slow on this installment.