All Comments on 'The Text Message Ch. 02'

I have really loved reading this story so far and can't wait for the next chapter(s)

I sometimes have mixed emotions about the Master Sub stories, but this one has struck a beautiful balance. Looking forward to more.

I have read all of the stories you have posted on this site and enjoyed them all. But this is hopefully turning out to be the best BDSM story ever and perhaps with no bondage or SM but psychological punishment rather than physical punishment this could be the best master sub story ever.

I don't like the Sub, Dom relationship at all but, this story has me entranced. I feel exactly as Justin does if I were in that relationship. And seeing Alicia's side is enlightening. I still can't stand being served in almost any manner but, EXCELLENT wordsmith. I love the story and can't wait for chapter 3.

Ok. I’m now hooked on this series.

He will have to discipline her, no way around it.

He does not have to whip her, but he can paddle and spank her. She will love it and in time so will he.

But he must never share her, she is his NOT a common whore.

Let’s see where this story takes us

5/5

I heartily agree with the vast majority of earlier commentators, your use of the English language is a a pleasure to read. Your story premise has held real promise throughout.