All Comments on 'The Text Message Ch. 03'

I am not really into the D/S scene but I find this story fascinating and I am hooked on it. You writing style is great. I shall be looking forward to following this story along with your future tails.

Thank you

JW

Another great chapter! Your writing style is great. I like how your are fleshing out the characters. I like how unsure he is, and how they interact together. Please keep up your excellent work. I can't wait for another chapter.

I wait impatiently for the next chapter to come out and here we are on Chapter 3 out of 6. I wish the story would continue way past 6 chapters.

...how often she argues with him about what he should do or the way something should be done. Remarkably disobedient for a sub. Is this an extreme example of topping from the bottom?

This is by far one of the most romantic and loving stories i have read. The characters are so well suited for each other it's amazing.

The guidance he recieved from mistress Chao was needed at that time and he is growing into his role as Master.

5 stars and I look forward to the next 3 chapters.

You've made this characters very real. I'm going to hate to see this end.

Building nicely

5/5