All Comments on 'The Therapist Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Excellent series!

With only a little imagination, it was almost believable. The tantlizing buildup is what made the story.

PikkuKallePikkuKalleover 14 years ago
An intriguing tale

Most intriguing indeed. I will admit I am not quite sure how to take it, as there is a certain "camp" aspect to the story. Or will the author be offended if I see a kind of parody here? There is not what is usually known as character development, but nonetheless the two youngsters do develope, no? And the descriptions of the sex therapy scenes are first rate. So yeah, I enjoyed the story and will read more of your stories.

aniceguy67aniceguy67about 14 years ago
Sooo Hot

The whole series was outstanding. Please write some more stories, you have a gift that you should share.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Hot night in therapy

I thought things were going to boil over and then it all turned out fine.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Remarkable

This was a very erotic yet touching story. I can not encourage this talented author enough. I will never look at a cheerleader the same way again!

Nell3dxNell3dxabout 12 years ago
Wow!

Wonderful story, I came so hard. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

A good start. But charolette turned... Idk... Evil and it left a bad taste in my mouth.

KingCuddleKingCuddlealmost 4 years ago
Welllll...I suppose we can call this a Happy Ending...of sorts?

In the interest of agreeing to "the willing suspension of disbelief"?

Okay.

But don't ask me believe it...:+)))

StubbyoneStubbyone8 months ago

Hmmmm.

The chapters prior to the final one were hotter than hot. However, the therapist devolved into a selfish, unlikeable person. The sex, in this chapter, between Anthony and the cheer leader was virtually identical to his sex between Anthony and Charlotte. The ending was anticlimactic, and a bit disappointing. I wasn’t sure where this was going, but it felt like you got tired of writing and wanted, no needed, it to end. I still gave it a 4, because your writing is good, but the unsatisfying ending seems contrived. No 18 year old male would want to give up the incredibly hot sex with the experienced milf of a therapist. I could not suspend belief that much. Please keep writing. You are exceedingly talented.❤️

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