All Comments on 'The Three ATS'

WTF? Doesn't really work for me.

Definitely keep writing because I really enjoyed your story! I would even suggest continuing this series. If you don't, then please keep writing in this genre(war time adventures). However if you do, it would be nice to learn a bit more about these characters backgrounds and their personalities. I loved Dorothy being the slightly arrogant, selfish, and narrow minded high-class girl who is more concerned about her appearance and casting the blame on others than their survival. Perhaps she should be punished in the future for being annoying? I also like Sarah being the sensitive and slightly foolhardy leader with poor interpersonal skills, and Jennie being the mature one out of the bunch who is practical and sensible but also not too serious. In addition, the trio should experience more challenges and setbacks the next time as the odds are stacked against them.

isnt even good