All Comments on 'The To-Do List'

Real life huh? Heheh. Sounds so familiar.

This was a fantastic story of a loving wife. Hell, it had everything, realism, fun, work and sex. All you needed was a nice steak on the bbq to make it complete. Thanks for the great story.

An actual loving wife. If your not careful, you will upset those "authors" that think betrayal is somehow erotic. I loved your story and I think it fits this category like a glove.

I liked this story - good pacing and good character development. Romantic and funny.

instead of a cheating loving wife story. Enjoyed it. Thanks!

Great fantasy and I am just jealous of those bygone days. You did a very good job of love and lust of two people who really know what fun and love can be.

You do need to proof read a bit but it was great entertainment.<P>PT

Is this supposed to be a story? Where is it ??

THIS WAS A STORY. IT SHOULD HAVE BEEN IN HUMOR AND SATIRE, TK U MLJ LV NV

short fun slice of life story. Nice ending line!

ME, ME AND THEN US. tk u mlj lv nv

this was awesome

Ah love is grand is it not?

sans any work could be a bucket list, TK U MLJ LV NV

Reminds me of my own Honey-Do List and the rewards of completing it! ;)

5 Solid Stars for a real Loving Wife!

Honey-Do lists are the best, But the rewards are even better.

Great way to finish your chores. Good reading.

Who would have thought! Nice story. It was fun to read about a happy couple.

This author needs to get a new sat-nav.!

How dare he actually put a loving wives story in the 'loving wives' section?

I mean, has he totally lost his mind and sense of propriety?

All however wasn't lost, because I enjoyed the rationalised rant and sense of outrage!

5 pointy things for the sharp sense of unreality!