by GeorgiaD
Not a story nor is it a chapter. It's barely a fragment.
A taste of more to come hopefully? Nicely written, was the trade fair at the Royal Cornwall Showground btw? :)
A slow build is a nice change of pace. Beginning slowly and not rushing to the sex, if there is any, is the art of the tease and can make for a better story. Going to the next installment now.
A good start that went nowhere. Such a shame because you obviously can write and the structure is good. Keep writing and give us more.
Best wishes
LindaCrystal x