All Comments on 'The Transformation Ch. 01'

A transformation story needs to be much longer and with more challenges. This was only a starter for a much longer meal.

He gives in too easily. Also, she acts flattered one minute at his attention, and then purports to be offended at his not PC behavior. It's a clear example of the hypocrisy of a lot of women today. Political Correctness is unmitigated evil, and must be smashed once and for all!