All Comments on 'The Transformation of Betty Ch. 09'

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14mylife14mylifeover 13 years ago
true to form

this is far and away the best,most in-depth story I have read in the many many years I have been reading porn. I can't come up with the right words to discribe all the thoughts and feelings it brings up. I will leave it at great. I don't know if it actually happened but the thought process is true to form. You are an excellent writer and a very lucky man. Congratulations.

STORM666STORM666over 11 years ago
should leave her with the girls she would have a dom then, not a voyeur for husband. lost interest in story

should leave her with the girls she would have a dom then, not a voyeur for husband. lost interest in the story

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago
Why

Why does dum_u_softly think a lesbian story belongs.in LW.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This progression in Betty's transformation into an all-out slut/whore to submit and pleasure anybody is amazingly erotic and sexy, lustful. Love this story

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My wife's status as a collared and shared sub slut is now past ... a widower and thus free to engage others, especially sub females who are or fantasize about being shared or husbands who contemplate sharing their wives ... in chat, ongoing contact (I do not, however, role pla...