All Comments on 'The Triple X Games'

Very imaginative and a lot of fun. I enjoyed the concept of the story as the sports coverage a great deal.

I thought the narrative was very well done and the dialogue among the announcers was excellent--it almost made you feel as though you were actually seeing the competition on the boob tube (sorry!). The only problem I had with the story was that the events, themselves, were very repetitive after awhile. Perhaps you could have branched out a bit into oral sex competitions and such, just as a change of pace (but I suppose I'm nitpicking here). I imagine that there will be another chapter to cover the second day of competition?

I give it an 8 for imagination and a 9 for execution.

Roger.

Looking forward to the next chapter.