All Comments on 'The True Professional Pt. 04'

So sad to see it end. It left me wondering; did she and Randy stay together? And if do, for how long? Now that she completed level three, did he leave soon there after to go back to his home? All in all good and well written story.

So sad to see it end. It left me wondering if they stayed together? And if so for how long? Or perhaps, since she finished level 3, did he leave soon thereafter to go back home. All and all a very good and well-written story.

Dutchboy51: your enthralling (heh) story was let down by its short final paragraph. It really seemed like Randy had found the one he wanted to keep, so why was this a catch-and-release? Where's the demonstration of her expanded self-knowledge? Please add a fifth part, however short, with some of this and maybe a little love in it. After all, he picked one he knew he'd be into. Cheers and thank you. -G

...five full stars for each chapter!!! The first place I looked when I started reading stories on Literotica was the 'miñd control' section, and stories like this are the reason why! You have just the right amount of control, so I don't mind relinquishing my subconscious to you. You and Master Hypnotist are two of my favorite authors on this site because it seems that you know from where you write; like you actually experienced the things about which you wrote, not merely having concocted these stories but actually lived those experiences. Once again, cudos to you, Dutchboy51 and I expect to read many more of your stories in the future.

YOMEO

The last sentence was really good thanks

Only the last sentence? LOL

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A really good storry