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HamsterHamsterover 6 years ago
Editor Needed

You are writing a great story and I look forward to every installment. That said, there are continuing spelling and usage issues that need an outside set of eyes. Lots of synonym and homonym problems. And you can't be "prone on your back". A person is prone when laying chest and stomach down and supine when laying on the back.

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