All Comments on 'The Truth Ch. 04'

by The_Fractal_King

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Softsubversion

GREAT erotic mind control story. Good characters. Good story that is well told. Very slow, very long indoctrination.

Unlike so many others, Fractual King actually has the patience to linger things out and make it build up slowly instead of a quick hitter. Pleasure posponed is pleasure intensified and so it is with these kinds of stories as well. Also interested to see how it all shakes down in the end. One of the best stories of this kind I have read in a long time. Great work Fractual. I can tell you really put in unusual time and effort. Thanks for a great EMC read.

The_Fractal_KingThe_Fractal_Kingover 9 years agoAuthor
I think....

.... that "soft subversion" may be my new favorite MC related phrase. I like it : )

curiousgirl08curiousgirl08over 9 years ago
Excellent story

I'm enjoying this story so much. I like that it's not rushed and you're kept wanting more. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great story

Loving the story so far. I hope someone like her coworker or maybe her sister is missing her and will try to save her.

Possibly_TrustworthyPossibly_Trustworthyover 3 years ago
Thank you

I just want you to know this is my favorite story on here.

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