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The Unfolding Ch. 01

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Seth had discerned many things about Camille and David McKay from this ride. Indeed, his plans were just beginning.

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6 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Awesome!

Really enjoyed this story.

SoleBrotherJeffSoleBrotherJeffover 9 years ago
Very Well Written 5 Stars

Loved the description of the characters & their feelings.

I can't wait to read more about them.

My only nitpicking comment is about the car. On page 1 it is described as a Mercedes SL550 Roadster. But on page 2 as they are arriving back at the hotel it is described as a Porsche.

TrixareforkidsTrixareforkidsover 9 years ago
Very nice.

Deliciously erotic. Keep it coming. ; )

b4urisb4urisover 9 years ago
excellent. an unassuming and seductive story

well developed, and it draws the reader in nicely.

bearsladybearsladyover 9 years ago

Well written and erotic. Do we get to see what his new plans are?

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