by rubydlite
A great story! Well told, vivid, and with a twinkle in the eye twist at the end.
I loved it!
Keep up the great work!
Very well done, well written, good imagery, pacing just right. The little twist at the end sliding over into inadvertent edging was a nice touch. I do hope you continue to write, you're very good at this.
Thanks for the comments everyone....fear not for her safety. ....i can assure you she's is...and will be...fine ;)