All Comments on 'The Unknown Suitor'

by rubydlite

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

reminds me of past experience enjoyed will follow in future

walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 10 years ago
Great Job!

A great story! Well told, vivid, and with a twinkle in the eye twist at the end.

I loved it!

Keep up the great work!

Slow Ride469Slow Ride469over 10 years ago
Wow

That's a hot story.....well done

KitschshamanKitschshamanover 10 years ago
wonderful ...

Very well done, well written, good imagery, pacing just right. The little twist at the end sliding over into inadvertent edging was a nice touch. I do hope you continue to write, you're very good at this.

Bert_FeggBert_Feggabout 10 years ago
Scary...

But well written. Will keep an eye out for more.

iammystiamiammystiamover 9 years ago
lovely

Such a lovely tale, great writing flare and style~!

wildernesswildernessover 9 years ago
Well written

But creepy. I fear for her safety.

tedsbedstedsbedsover 9 years ago
Voyeur?

Love to watch being watched. Nice

rubydliterubydliteover 9 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the comments everyone....fear not for her safety. ....i can assure you she's is...and will be...fine ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
boo

This story blows.

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