All Comments on 'The Vacation'

I just cannot get into abusive talk.

Eva needs to show a baby bump in a few months

I just don’t like verbal abuse.

Loved Dad and SON both fucking his wife

Now Mom will join the fun

Very nice. Keep it up.

Sorry but there was no Incest in this story. Father and son banging his wife is not incest. 1star is all you get

Come on, really? Insulting a woman for liking sex is stupid.Stop with the moralizing, and leave that to the religiously perverse, like priests or something.

Abuse is abuse, even if it is fantasy...

its a very sexy story. i gave it 5 stars - hoping in chapter 2 you'd tone down the slut talk. But i really liked the story - quite clever. could have had a little more tease, but the sex was great. i look forward to reading chapter 2 - and 3 as well.

I must have missed the incest part. Being chokehold by your father is a stretch. I liked how you described the fucking but thought the story line weak. Kept writing and we all hope you get it someday.

Obviously you missed, "You need a pussy, see your mother." Yeah, that little but counts, and, obviously, you can't read.

Maybe a little strong with the language and the idea that because a woman enjoys sexual interaction makes her a slut, but I enjoyed the fantasy and descriptions., imagining being on such a vacation. Clenching would describe my responses whilst reading.

I gave two stars, sloppy writing. Definitely fits taboo though.

Please continue with more chapters. Include other family members and servants also.

It needs to continue

Surprise beginning.

Can’t wait for the next chapter.