All Comments on 'The Vacation Ch. 01'

Loved the sex. I can't wait to hear more. The possibilities are endless!

At times it is a little hard to follow, but overall we liked it. My wife and I have participated in quite a few foursomes with another couple, and we enjoy reading about them. Keep the series coming.

The author seemed to be confused between writing a screenplay or a narrative; story jumped between first and third person as well. The author has the vision, just needs a lot of work on the writing skills! Because of this, I couldn't get into the sensuality.

Kinda hard to follow. They start the story sounding like non swingers but minutes later they are all screwing in the same room.

I like the nude resort story line but you could have done more with it.

Sex scene was good!!!!!!!!

would love to be at the same resort as you two..