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don87654about 20 years agoNeeds more work
This story has a lot of potential. Needs to be re-written with the thought in mind that a "bank deposit" could have been made, with interest "growing" over the next 9 months or so.
Anonymousabout 20 years agoTHE VAULT
The story is fundamentally good. The idea is great; fun is the purpose of her encounter as well as her message. I would like to read more.
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