All Comments on 'The Villa Epilogue'

Olvido letting Antonio fuck her because it is his 18th birthday may apply in England or US, but in Spain the age of consent is 13. So really she should have let him fuck her on his 13th birthday. This may be under age from our point of view, but not from a Spanish. And even if it is under age, it is a taboo section.

Thanks Anon, there were several references in earlier stories and the epilogue, but I was unable to use them as the stories are rejected if there are any reference to sexual activity with or between minors, even historical (this also applies to physical descriptions of the appearance of minors). On reflection I don't think the revised versions and the conclusion suffered by this and perhaps it helped avoid clutter in the narrative. If it keeps the crazies away who am I to argue, them's the rules we write under. Anyway many thanks for your input, it is very welcome.

really enjoyed it. I would have liked to read more of Jack and Chloe's adventures though.