All Comments on 'The Wager'

Author, a Loving Wife is NOT a cheating wife. Realizing that most Loving Wives authors here think that, but it isn't so. Only a very few authors get it right.

So, this is how a loving husband treats his loving wife??!!!

The basic premise was decent, but the portrayal of winning the bet belies the "happily married" element.

I like the subject matter and direction this is going, but the wife is changing too fast to be believable. You've got a whole month. Slow it down and work on making the change somewhat credible.

But you have some spelling issues. Examples - starring for staring, and starred for stared.

No - really really BAD

STORY? No plot, no anything but the author showing his hostility toward women

It was stupid, stupid, stupid.

I liked it. After all it was a fantasy. My wife and I would

have fantasies about things like this. I for one say keep going. I like the direction it is going.

Good job.

Great win!

I loved the way that you were putting the wife to use.

I can't wait to read the next part of your story.

I am hoping that you put her to good use, if you know what I mean!!!

I Love the direction it is going. You had me wondering what would happen next. Does someone from her work see her stripping and what happens then. Does a neighbor see her walking down the street. Do any of these men not like her or does she hate them and what her husband thinks and how excited he might get. Lots of potential. Hope you don't mind suggestions.

Please keep the story going. It is great.

Getting a woman to submit to this would be wonderful,

The only thing is that most women wouldn't, and cut your sex life off for even suggesting it.

A exciting fantasy though

Thanks for the read

The story was written well enough that many possibilities for the rest of the month are evident and begging for another chapter or six. I did think about the possible danger of her becoming a SLUT... she may begin sharing her new found love of fucking with men other than her husband. She may dance well enough to become a pro. He may end up divorced.

Oh, the possibilities!

The only possible reply to that is "and if you valued your wife, you wouldn't treat me like this, I guess we're done ".

Can see this saga developing into a BBC gang bang for the lovely Kay! (If the story continues to expand,I'd like to see her win the next wager and have hubby being made the center of a gay sandwich!

Worse than bad. Not even a story. Just a short depiction of a coup!e of idiots.

I think she can do better than him. Divorce is the solution to her problem.